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雅思作文7分+高分区!8年老司机带你玩,快上车!

厦门朗阁培训中心朗阁时间:2017-04-24 17:04

摘要:说到作文,我们第一反应就是写。如何写?写什么?哎哎雅思写作老司机要开车啦!

今天,咱们来就来探讨一下雅思作文。

不知道烤鸭宝宝们有没有想过啊,考官眼中的7分+作文是什么样子?什么样的作文才是7分+作文?

其实,雅思作文跟我们写的中文作文一样都需要中心思想,在考试的时候考生们可以进行构思,理清思路,找出两个贴切的、具有说服力的、相互独立的论据,然后进行审题。

好的审题,能够正确引导学生写出好的作文。

下面我们先来看看剑桥雅思10 General Test 2 P129的栗子:

Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.

What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

这道题目要注意:有些家长给孩子买很多玩具玩,注意写的时候要突出玩具的数量多,还有就是这些玩具最主要是给孩子玩耍的,而不是有教育意义或者欣赏之类的。

If a product is good or if it meets people’s needs, people will buy it. Therefore, advertising is unnecessary and nothing more than a form of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

题目翻译:如果一个产品好或者人们需要它时,人们就会去买它。因此,广告是不需要的,它只是一种娱乐方式。你在多大程度上同意或者不同意这个观点?

题目解析:仔细阅读完这道题目,很容易能够看出,考官的本意是在比较产品好的销售是和口碑效应有关,还是和广告的宣传存在一定关系。

那我们在考虑这道题目时,不能单纯的只承认口碑的作用,广告在一定程度上对产品的销量也是起到很关键的作用的,例如可以给消费者多样的选择以及帮助商家扩大知名度等。

那要写好这道题,首先得要了解一个单词,即口碑效应,英文叫word of mouth, a term used to describe the comments of the quality of the products.

高分作文案例欣赏:

The advertising industry providesa platform(平台) for the business entities(实体) to spread awareness about the products and services offered by them. A good advertisement is one which does not just attract the new consumers, but also persuades the loyal(忠诚的) consumers of therival firms(竞争公司) to shift bases(改变立场). From the consumers perspective(观点), advertising is important for the consumers as it makes him aware of the various choices that are available.

再如论证口碑效应时,可以用举例论证的形式把口碑效应的作用写得更渗透。One good example can be found in those old days or rural areas, word of mouth was the only marketing technique(市场策略). It is no wonder that the local people had not any trouble in pursuing theirsatisfactory goods(满意的产品).



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